Epilogue:
I think using my transition into college blog post 1 and revised post deepened my understanding of a growth mindset. I could fluently state what the differences in-between a growth and fixed mindset were, and even give supporting scientific examples on why a growth mindset is superlative to a fixed. However, when the task at hand was to identify a scenario in my life of embracing mistakes and choosing to use them to gain further knowledge I struggled. I strongly believe with A Growth Mindset In Progress the reader will be able to follow better than my original Perfection To Pieces. The sentence structure is in simpler form and the imagery details are not so overwhelming that the reader gets lost. With revisions, I would like to work more on word choices. I feel as though the language I use is at a college level, but I would like to use words that show and tell my meanings.
I think using my transition into college blog post 1 and revised post deepened my understanding of a growth mindset. I could fluently state what the differences in-between a growth and fixed mindset were, and even give supporting scientific examples on why a growth mindset is superlative to a fixed. However, when the task at hand was to identify a scenario in my life of embracing mistakes and choosing to use them to gain further knowledge I struggled. I strongly believe with A Growth Mindset In Progress the reader will be able to follow better than my original Perfection To Pieces. The sentence structure is in simpler form and the imagery details are not so overwhelming that the reader gets lost. With revisions, I would like to work more on word choices. I feel as though the language I use is at a college level, but I would like to use words that show and tell my meanings.